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[chess]

Depression:
When all the world was falling down
Around our shoulders; cold and grey

Coming up:
We laughed and wondered why
We loved the sky and found the space

Mania:
Like you're getting on a roller coaster
You can't find the breaks

Going down:
And leaves they turn to brown
And then to earth and dust
And settle in this town

I don't know what I'm babbling about.

Comments

[passage.livejournal.com]

Neither do I, but I wonder if changing 'breaks' to 'brakes' would help a little. Or is it correct and there's some deeper meaning I haven't spotted.

Neil

[chess]

Yes; just copied it off a lyrics site and hadn't noticed that.

[foreverdirt.livejournal.com]

I quite like the way it works with "breaks", although I couldn't really explain why.