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New, improved Haylar, now with much less narration, much more speech, and even a little bit of pathos!
It's also quite possibly the last Haylar for a week, or maybe even a couple of weeks, depending on my Net access and botheredness levels (and the tuit supply, naturally). And my wrist hurts. That is all.
It's also quite possibly the last Haylar for a week, or maybe even a couple of weeks, depending on my Net access and botheredness levels (and the tuit supply, naturally). And my wrist hurts. That is all.
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Date: 2002-08-14 02:46 am (UTC)From:A comic is released which is genuinely witty. But horrifically overnarated. Michelle promises less narration in future.
And now, for the conclusion.
Well, I have to agree that we've got over the narration problem.
However, there's still a great mass of text plastered over the screen.
Some indication of whom it belongs to (i.e. who's saying it) would be a really good thing.
Neil, who can figure some out, thinks others are ambiguous and is wondering if other lines are there by accident without anyone saying it.